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Ch. 16 Page 477

May 31st, 2010, 12:00 pm

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Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, May 31st, 2010, 12:08 am

I won the fight! I had to really fight myself to finish this page for some reason. Just wasn't in the mood I guess. But needed to be done. At least I did it! Didn't come out all that great but meh. It's done.

I'm actually not sure how updates will go this week. I work every day and that sometimes gets in the way. There are a couple short shifts but . . . yeah. I don't know how it'll go. You've been warned. I'll try my hardest. I hope. Just be aware that I might miss one or two.

Wish I'd stop losing my rulers though. Dang it.

This gives a bit of insight of why Hillaree really hates her powers. She's afraid that she somehow caused the accident that killed Bryan. That's why she was so reluctant to use her powers before. This part leads right into the conversation on Page 42 of Hillaree's story. Now you can see where the conversation started before that.

I like the background in the last panel even though it's perspective makes very little sense. I'm not sure what angle that supposed to be but it's probably not right. I was going to add people in the background behind her . . . but then . . . didn't. Go me. The first three panels are kinda just meh, if even that. Could be better.

So if you missed it, revealed the legendaries for Black and White. I have mixed feelings as of right now about them. I like them, but I kinda wish they'd go back to designing simpler Pokemon again. Doesn't seem like it's going to happen though. Once I get more used to them as being Pokemon, I'll like them more. I like the black one better than the white one. I'll probably go for it.

That's all I got to say. Hopefully I'll be back with another update for Wednesday! Visit the forums!

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Vye Brante, May 31st, 2010, 3:30 am

Oops, typo. I just noticed a typo. I've been doing that a lot lately. In the last panel, she says "changes" and it's supposed to be "chances."

I'd fix it except I'm about to go to sleep and I am currently on my laptop. I've been making pages on my desktop nowadays so the file is over there. I can't fix it from here. My desktop has already shut down and I don't feel like turning it back on.

So yeah, typo. I'll fix it. Let me know if you guys spot any others.

Edit: Fixed the typos. Finally.

User's Comments:

Djoing, May 31st, 2010, 12:28 pm

will hillaree ever turn happy again?

Or will she remain emo-hillaree for the rest of the comic?

Rocket0634, May 31st, 2010, 2:25 pm

If she can't find a way to listen to Mewthree when he tries to tell her something, then I'm pretty sure she won't listen to anyone... As a prediction... the only way I can see her finally getting it is by something important or something happening to her.

You know, there could be people there, but I doubt Hillaree would even notice them. We could be seeing this from Hillaree's mind, and knowing that she knows what he looks like now, it could just be images from her own mind being put into the comic page...
Well, that's just an idea, so you don't have to listen to me. Really, don't try to draw more than you feel like. Don't want to draw more people? Then don't. It looks better without them. Even if they /are/ there.

the being, May 31st, 2010, 2:36 pm

Djoing: I highly, HIGHLY, with a 99999999% chance doubt that Hillaree will remain 'emo' for the rest of the comic. It's just that unlikely to happen. She'll definitely come around when the time comes~

Heh, I can't do perspectives in background at all. -_-;

spudwalt (Guest), May 31st, 2010, 3:41 pm

@ Djoing & the being: Yeah, Hillaree's going to snap out of the emo eventually. At the very latest, it's probably going to happen when she finds out about the Numans messing with Earth and her family.

SilverLion (Guest), May 31st, 2010, 3:51 pm

I think I'd be scared of powers I didn't know how to control either, however, that shouldn't stop a person from learning that control. They'd be more dangerous otherwise. I think I'd be more afraid of what would happen because I didn't have control.

Leafy Savanna Chan, May 31st, 2010, 4:42 pm

On the subject of typos, you put "k now" instead of "know", I think. It might just be my imagination.
I agree with Rocket about the last panel. Don't overwork yourself. ^^

Christo556, June 1st, 2010, 1:02 am

finally somebody came with a cheri, my arms was starting to hurt, thanks grr8008 :)

Hero of Comedy, June 1st, 2010, 5:04 pm

Dang, no one wants their powers to work subconsciously.

Vye Brante, June 3rd, 2010, 12:59 pm

Djoing: She just needs to have her emo-time. She'll get over herself eventually.

Rocket0634: It wasn't so much that she wasn't really listening. She just wasn't sure what else could have happened. So until she finds a better explanation, she's holding on to that possibility.

I . . . think I know what you mean? Whatever the reason, there aren't people there so oh well.

the being: Yeah, Hillaree will get over it. You'd all leave me if Hillaree stayed like this forever. Heh.

Perspective is on the list of my many weaknesses.

spudwalt: Yeah, she'll snap out of it. We'll just have to see when and how.

SilverLion: That is true. Hillaree has been able to control them enough not to use them since though. At least when she didn't mean to. So it worked out for her I suppose.

But yeah, that would be a worry I'd have if I was her.

Leafy Savanna Chan: Yay for me and typos! Heh, thank you for pointing it out for me.

I'm pretty lazy so overworking isn't usually a concern!

Christo556: Yay! I'm happy for 'ya.

Hero of Comedy: Nope. It's better to have control over 'em.

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