Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, 01 Jul 2009 06:36 pm

Meh, I don't like this page. I was trying to cram too much into it, I think. The flow is a bit weird, and there was little room for all of the word bubbles. And I was lazy artwise so there's very little to make up for the rest of the page. If I was a less lazy person, I'd redo this page and make it two instead of one. But . . . yeah. We need to get back on track anyway.

So now Spyro can see Mewthree too. That's pretty nifty. Mewthree introduces the link for you, although a lot of you figured that out anyway. I threw in the flashback in the second to last panel to remind you of when Hillaree got hit on Page 294, but it's hard to tell that's what it is . . . And the Abra is back too! I like his teleport effects at least. I'll experiment more with it, but I like it.

The next page is the last of this chapter! Finally! Sheesh, I started this chapter in March! Remember that after the chapter is over, Just Gotta will be on hold until I get the chapter in Gotta Past finished. This also works out as I can't decide for sure how I want Chapter 14 to go. I keep changing my mind. More time to think it over will be nice. Just remember to get gags and stuff in to me so I can put them up in the meantime! I'll still be doing a discussion and whatnot, so I'll provide a bit of filler. Just would like some help.

How about you visit the forums now? Huh? Huh? Huh? Huh?!!

User's Comments:

the being, 01 Jul 2009 06:46 pm

the last two panels moved a tiny bit too fast, but it's alright! ^^
Edit: sorry bout that! the internet is crashing on me here, (which means i am not at home) And i had to go, so i just kept clicking it and exited out of internet. heh.
And by the way, HAPPY 25TH PAGE ANIVERSERY! heh. that's right. I have been with this comic for 25 pages! yay me!

DragonhandX, 01 Jul 2009 07:01 pm

@comic:teleporting is awesome.

@comments:hhhmmmmmmmmm, i might make a gag.

you posted twice being.

spudwalt (Guest), 01 Jul 2009 07:08 pm

The page was a little crowded, but it works out. I guess it also reflects the fast pace of the story at this point.

Heh, now Spyro can see Mewthree. This should be interesting.

Vye Brante, 01 Jul 2009 07:30 pm

the being: The whole pacing and flow on this page was off. Thank you though!

You had a double post so I deleted the dupilicate. I am assuming that's okay.

DragonhandX: Thank you! And yay for gags!

spudwalt: Yeah, I should made the layout better. I don't know why I though I had to cram it all in. And yeah, this should be good!

VexxBlack, 01 Jul 2009 08:46 pm

Well that was random, "Who're you?!" "Hello there." XD;
Hmm...maybe not as random as the Abra o_o;

BlackCatz, 01 Jul 2009 11:16 pm

Abra seems to specialize in random, VexxBlack >.>

anyway, awesome to have Spyro see Mewthree now! XD Brill! And I really enjoyed the fast pace of this page.. it's apporiate for this page, as I'm sure a lot of stuff is happening all at once, as people get over the shock of Deoxys appearing and doing what he did..


I'm kinda tired right now.. spent a fun-filled day outside today with friends, seeing a parade, eating junk food and stuff.. all wearing red and white! It's July 1, so that means for us Canucks... it's Canada Day! XD So didn't check SJ until just now >.>

Djoing, 02 Jul 2009 01:33 am

'congratulations! Your Mewthree is now called "Hello there"'

PoC (Guest), 02 Jul 2009 05:23 am

She was stabbed in the back... why isn't she like "OW MY BACK SOMEONE GET THIS THING OUTTA ME ISUJOPASHJSIPDOFH!!!!!" already?

DragonhandX, 02 Jul 2009 07:06 am

@PoC:her shirt froze. the burn of the ice is making it hurt a lot.

Vye Brante, 02 Jul 2009 03:04 pm

VexxBlack: Yeah, the Abra was a bit more random than that . . . Just a bit.

BlackCatz: Happy Cananda Day then! Sounds like you had fun. Hope you got rested up!

The pacing kinda fits in that sense, I suppose. It just doesn't work as far as clarity goes, and clarity is very important!

Djoing: Ha ha, is he now?

PoC: She wasn't actually stabbed. Just hit with a chunk of ice real hard. It does look like she was stabbed though. I kinda drew it funny.

DragonhandX: Yep, exactly.

Sammi_the_Echinda: Yayz! And yay for Mewthree too!

DracheLehre, 02 Jul 2009 08:37 pm

Spyro's panic when he sees Mewthree is priceless

luvsmepokemon, 02 Jul 2009 09:44 pm

sorry vye 1. About freaking out like that...
2. Adressing you so formaly
3. joining in on youre fun...
i wont point stuff out on ppl you havent...
4. being lazy
5. freaking out
6. repeating myself but i just had too repeat that one

the being, 03 Jul 2009 07:56 am

Errr...
There is only one thing I want out of hilaree. XD
STOP PUSHING YOUR FRIENDS AWAY!
heh.
I know it will take time for that. :P
But when it does happen, I'll be very happy! XP

luvsmepokemon, 04 Jul 2009 02:30 pm

posting... again well i desided i'm not going to point out the funny stuff in other ppl's comments...
tell me. why is it that they just pointed at eachother instead of freaking out and backing away 1 step and doing some kind of creaped out point?
this happend in the last one and i just noticed

Regina Avari, 05 Jul 2009 11:01 pm

Panel four is pretty cute.

Vye Brante, 09 Jul 2009 01:29 pm

DracheLehre: Ha ha, thank you. I liked how it came out too.

luvsmepokemon: Oh, it's no problem! I'm glad you wanted an update enough to complain about it! While I do appreciate patience, an occasional complaint does give me a good kick and gets me going. It would get annoying if everyone did it all the time, yeah, but I'm glad you said something. It was motivation to me.

Why did they just point to each other? I dunno. Just how I imagined it I suppose.

the being: Heh heh, yeah, that might be something Hillaree needs to get over. We'll see if and how she does so.

Regina Avari: Thanks!

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