Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, 06 Mar 2009 03:42 am

Tee-hee, disliked . . . Arceus has to take SOME abuse from me. I mean, come on. It's me. Heh.

Love the fourth panel! I order it! I worked hard on it without really knowing what I was doing or what I was going for . . . Still, it ain't too horrible . . . My sister could tell what it was when she looked at it at least. Mostly.

Ha ha, an eclipse now? This really is turning into Avatar!!

Sorry if the order of the bubbles in the last panel confused you. I tried it differently but it looked funny . . . Hope you figured it out if it confused you anyway. I also don't know how big Dialga and Arceus are in proportion to each other and I didn't check. Hope I guessed pretty close.

I think I'll take the poll down Sunday, so vote in it if you haven't! Also, visit the forums. Just Mewtwo was updated earlier too so you can check that out. Just Mewtwo has less fans than Just Gotta, so I wonder if everyone is following the story. Ah well. Remember to get your gags in! You have just over a week now.

User's Comments:

jakehayes (Guest), 06 Mar 2009 12:03 pm

Looks Great.. Hey Vye I think it all looks great, but I think that Arceas is smaller then Dialga. He's about the size of a clydes dale horse. Unless you were going for diagla looking far away in panel one and Arceas up closer. Other wise Arceas looks tons bigger then he should. Dialga is tons bigger then Arceas. Anyway... Your Art is great and I wish I could draw half as well as you can. :)

BK_1/VGKid, 06 Mar 2009 12:22 pm

I missed so much and its getting more and more intense. Freaking awesome

Joshua, 06 Mar 2009 12:45 pm

"You're just sore because you know she doesn't like you." ... I honestly dunno if he's referring to Ven or Vye here.

supercomputer276, 06 Mar 2009 01:10 pm

Let's see... according to Bulbapedia:
Arceus: 10'06"
Dialga: 17'09"
Palkia (just cause I'm friendly): 13'09"

Djoing, 06 Mar 2009 01:46 pm

Arrow of dislike..ness.

DragonhandX, 06 Mar 2009 02:17 pm

sp276:isn't dialga kneeling?

so hil has to make the dicision (HOW DO YOU ******* SPELL THAT WORD?!?) in three (3) years? she intends to.......MAKE A YUMMY CAKE! THEN HAVE A PARTY! THEN GET DRUNK *shot*
from the back of the comment area:okay, maybe not the drunk part.
is the bubble order in panel 4 top left, top right, bottom left, bottom right? so there are three types of births, dark, light and gray? if genders are included then there are six. is arceas dark, light, or other (if there is no gray)? what about dialga, palkia, and all the other characters that has made an appearance? and this ******* 's' KEY WON'T WORK SOMETIMES!!
random chansey:there there, all you have to do is to go back and put it in.
and on that note i'll top typing this comment.







maybe. YES!

Vye Brante, 06 Mar 2009 02:24 pm

jakehayes: Looks like they proved you right. I just didn't care enough to check. Heh. Although I drew Dialga a lot smaller than that. Glad I made him bigger.

Anyway, thanks!

BK_1/VGKid: Ha ha, well, I'm glad you enjoyed catching up!

Joshua: Well . . . Ven is a guy so he's out. I'm not in the comic so they can't be talking about me so I'm out.

Dialga is talking about how Hillaree doesn't like him. I do share that with her though.

supercomputer276: Heh, thanks for looking it up where I was too lazy to. I'll keep that in mind for the future I suppose. Fortunately they don't appear together after this.

Djoing: And a fearsome thing it is. Heh heh.

DragonhandX: I guess we could say he is still laying down. That would get us closer at least. What decision she must make will be revealed later.

The second "type" should be revealed next chapter so hold on tight. I will say there are only two of each type. Dialga, Arceus, and the others are not included.

master of ledgendary pokemon (Guest), 06 Mar 2009 04:57 pm

im back hey it me the one thatr keeps asking for a lucario well i think you should make the next chapter more advengerous
you nkow what i mean
and i want to know is it free to be a basic not a member for smackjeeves

RazorD9, 06 Mar 2009 08:19 pm

She must master all four elements (plus steel) in order to save the world! Or something like that.

spudwalt (Guest), 06 Mar 2009 09:00 pm

Yeah, into Avatar... or maybe Heroes (I actually know squat about Avatar, though). In any case, panel 4 looks cool.

I knew Arceus would get abused at some point.

Yay! More Just Mewtwo! Must... go... look...

Junethine, 07 Mar 2009 07:36 pm

Haven't been here in a while. o.O

What's up?

But seriously, wow.

Vye Brante, 07 Mar 2009 09:01 pm

master of legendary pokemon: It's all free, actually. You don't have to pay for anything unless you want to donate, and that's totally optional.

Chapter 13 will be a bit more adventurous, so don't worry!

RazorD9: Ha ha, yep, something like that. And steel is important!

spudwalt: And I know squat about Heroes so I guess we're even. Heh.

It was a given that he'd be abused, yep. It was either that or a villain role I suppose . . . This was just easier to work with.

I guess you can't see when stuff gets updated unless you check, huh. Glad you're excited!

Junethine: Yeah, it has been a while! Welcome back, and I hope that means you enjoyed it. Heh.

SaitouRyu, 28 Mar 2009 05:47 pm

ya now that's more like it. Way to go Dialga.

werekitty13, 20 Jun 2010 04:50 pm

Nobody likes Arceus :P

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