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August 5th, 2008, 1:05 pm

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Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, August 5th, 2008, 12:58 pm

I don't care if it sucks . . . For some reason, I still like the second panel. Really, it's horrible, but I still like it. Maybe I'll change my mind though about liking it, knowing me. I think I'm mostly just proud that I did it and that I did it in such a small panel.

Heh, I'm totally abusing those tones to make explosions. It at least sorta works. Hopefully I can come up with something better.

Well, that's about it, so visit the forums.

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User's Comments:

Damien'sWater, August 5th, 2008, 1:11 pm

...I love sunny day! Uhm...I hope they use solarbeam or that move was just usless...

Edit: Oh never mind, didn't see the cyndiquil(sp?)...

kirbyboy102, August 5th, 2008, 1:17 pm

Why does Sunny day exist? It doesn't really do much...

Damien'sWater, August 5th, 2008, 1:20 pm

Are you kiding! It is great for grasstypes with the move solarbeam! Not so great with fire pokemon but it helps.

Sappire (Guest), August 5th, 2008, 1:56 pm

Random Note:
Sunny day is my best friend.
Just ask my Flygon.
Normal Comment-ness (in other words, rant-thing):
I love this comic! 8D I've managed to read the entire comic in two days, despite finding it in the middle of the night the first day. :3 Ahah, I've even read the side-comics, viewed all the side pages and considered working on a Pokemon Comic I've been putting off myself. xD
I also admire the fact that I can't say I've seen anyone swear yet. O__o'''';
Seriously.
I'm getting tired of that every other line in the other comics I've read.
Am I allowed to glomp you painfully? 8D
Critique-ness:
I can't say a whole lot. O__o
I, myself, still draw everything in MS Paint with obvious sharp lines and lack of practice.
I believe I've already seen advice on the dark outlines, so that's covered.
The plot = amazingness. Seriously. 8D You found a way to still start out with a normal starter- which happens to be my personal favorite. *Coughcough*- and yet it's far from the overused thing of an Ash-like character deciding to go on a journey and hunting down Professor Oak.
The way the pages only seem to cover a few minutes worth of the story make it seem like you're almost reading a Magna-type book, so I love that aspect.
Although I do tend to lurk on the latest page and wait non-too-patiently for the next installment.
And I love how all the Pokemon just wander up and decide they want to join the team. xD Seriously, I think my favorite Pokemon is the Zubat. You have to love how he caught himself.
As far as art goes, it's simply lovely. :3 There's always room for improvment, of course, but you're starting out well. Better than when I started doodling comics where the people just had perfectly rounded heads, no nose and dots for eyes.
Did I menion loopy shoelaces?
The only thing that's bothered me in the art is the Pokemon, or at least some of them. Beleive me, I know how hard it is to try and draw the hundreds of pokemon, who all seem to have different builds and styles, in the same comic.
I don't know why, but sometimes I do get the feeling too much work was put into one panel. O__o Sometimes it just looks like a certain picture has stiffer lines to it, which is usually caused by trying too hard to get all the joints and such in the right place.
I'd suggest relaxing a bit more if that's the case, and not fretting so much over small details. If it's not the problem, then ignore me. xD'''';
...
I think I've ranted enough. O__O'''''; Seriously, forgive me. xD
If you were considering blocking guest posts before, you probably will now. xD
*Scuttles out*

Phoenix of Chaos, August 5th, 2008, 2:01 pm

Longest. Comment. EVA!
Involving the comic, thumbs up! Again...

This is a test, August 5th, 2008, 5:04 pm

OMG!!! dude... that crazy. you wrote alot... anyway, good strip. i like the 2nd pannel 2. saffire, do you prefere flygon or salmance?

Sappire (Guest), August 5th, 2008, 5:09 pm

I should put a title, shouldn't I? Please, call me Sappire. Note the P's. No H, long story. xD
Yes, I'm a typist wanna-be.
As for Flygon and Salamence- Flygon so wins. |D
*Huggles her non-existant "pet"*
He and my Gengar are my best Pokemon I've got to my name. :3

This is a test, August 5th, 2008, 5:21 pm

sorry :( sorry sappire. and finally! long live the anti-salmance revaloution!!! sorry, i have problems. i like gengar, hes my favorite ghost type, but hes not in my top 10. >>

Sappire (Guest), August 5th, 2008, 5:47 pm

No worries. :3 Hee. x3
I dislike Salamence.
He's a bit too popular for me. ^^ Flygon is just... perfect. 8D
On Neopets- a pet site for those not knowing- I have adoptables in the form of Flygons. xD'''';
*Geeknerd*
EDIT-ness:
Ahah. xD Gengar = Awsomeunbeatableness.
My Top five consist of Lucario, Flygon, Gengar, Charizard and Smeargle.
Seriously, Smeargle.
He reminds me of Roy Orbison. :3

Oranges_and_Pears, August 5th, 2008, 9:15 pm

Cool!

Regina Avari, August 5th, 2008, 10:16 pm

I have to say that Chikorita looks absolutely adorable in the last panel. So smiley! I want to hug her! (It is female, correct? o.o; )

This is a test, August 6th, 2008, 11:02 am

my top 5... i guess mine are in order: Meganium, Pikachu, Absol, Dragonite, Ninetails. I cant live without them. the gloryous anti-salmance revaliution! i HATE them. burn, my uglies, burn! ha ha hah ha!

amjam, August 6th, 2008, 11:08 pm

Sorry I haven't been around as much, guys. I was at camp. ^^; Still loving the past few pages; I particularly like the first panel on this one, and it seems as though the battle keeps getting crazier.

Also, new fan.... And I think I know you. Welcome to the Just Gotta comment-dom, Sappire- you don't by any chance go by the same name on Neopets, do you? I'm vxcz263 there ;D

Oh and to join in: My top five are Sandshrew, Crobat, Togetic, Ampharos, and Feraligatr. (I do love many many Pokemon, but there you have it narrowed down. =D)

Visit the forums!

Sappire (Guest), August 7th, 2008, 1:19 am

*Dies* I think I just did a double-take. xD xD''';
vxcz263? I know I had a shorter name for you at sometime, but my horrible memory fails me. ^^''';
But, yes, I would be Sappire_Charizard, the only one I know of by that misspelled name. xD''''';
Fooorums. xD
*Must look into that*

EDIT-ness:
Fwaa. Didn't I used to call you VC or something? o__o'''; That randomly popped into my head.

Phoenix of Chaos, August 7th, 2008, 8:58 am

My top 5? Empoleon, Lucario, Moltres, Blaziken, Flygon. Nowhere in the top 100? Salamence. Why? His wings look like axe blades.

CosmaFlower, August 7th, 2008, 3:59 pm

my top five are Absol, Mightyena, Umbreon, Espeon,and Roserade. Why? They leard cool move and they look awesome

Vye Brante, August 8th, 2008, 3:06 am

Damien'sWater: Yeah, I hope they have Solarbeam too . . . heh heh.

But yeah, it's also for the Cyndaquil's attack. And yeah, Sunny Day is an awesome move!

kirbyboy102: What?! Sunny Day is one of the few non-attack moves I use. It powers up Fire Type Moves, makes Solar Beam hit in one turn instead of two, makes Morning Sun and Moonlight work much better than normal, can cancel out the annoying weather effects like Hail and Sandstorm, makes it so you Pokemon won't be frozen solid, and makes Castform and Cherrim change form! What other moves can do that?!

Consider youself educated!

Sappire: Well . . . I don't know about painfully, but you can glomp me sure.

I'm glad that you like the comic. You have long comment there . . . Sorry if I don't address everything specificially. Just thanks!

I will say I don't know what you mean that there's too much work in one panel. Some of them just require more work than others, and I'm not sure that that's a bad thing. I guess it just sorta depends. But don't worry, I'm not like forcing myself or anything normally. I enjoy making the comic.

Heh, and don't worry, I won't block guest comments just because of you. And yeah, Flygon is cool. I like Salamence too however. Dragonite is adorable as well.

Phoenix of Chaos: Who? Me? Or this Sappire? If the latter, heck no. Amjam has him/her beat. Still, yeah, well done.

Salamence is pretty cool. Flygon is probably my favorite Dragon Type too though . . . Nice list of Pokemon you have anyways.

Oranges_and_Pears: Thanks!

Regina Avari: Ha ha, thanks! I think so too! I'm happy with how that looks.

amjam: Yay! Missed you! Ha ha.

And glad you like the way it's all going. I hope I can pull off all the action I have planned. (You know what I mean!)

CosmaFlower: Welcome! Anyways, another good list. Dark type fan it seems. Neat. I really like Espeoen's and Absol's too.

Phoenix of Chaos, August 10th, 2008, 5:48 am

AH I'M STUCK FOR CHOICE! I can no longer decide which is my top five, out of the preciously given list or five of the Eevee-loutions. HELP!

This is a test, August 10th, 2008, 8:35 am

ma list contineud! 6. Leafeon
7. Suicune (sorry, but he is awsome! hes the only legandary thats in ma top ten!)
8. Flygon
9. Venusaur
10. Noctowl

Rebirth (Guest), August 14th, 2008, 4:32 pm

I'm back! hooray? Hmm, I'm such a bad fan of this.
I haven't read this since I left.
Which was like, back in April. :(
I think I was on chapter 8 last time too.
hmph, well time for me to read! aha.

EDIT: Okay, seems like I'm caught up.
and I'll be more into this now that I'm back. Oh, and uhm. . .I'm coming back into spritig. yay? and I'll have a new username soon.

SaitouRyu, August 15th, 2008, 4:18 pm

I do believe that I haven't commented in a while. Its good to see that you are gaining so many more readers. :D I know I, myself, was hooked from the start. I don't play pokemon very much but I do collect the cards occasionally. @_@ I think right now I have a litle too many though. My favorite pokemon would have to be Scyther, then Lugia, Suicune, Celebi, flygon etc. haha I shouldn't forget Absol. He's an awesome pokemon as well. I'd have to say Mewtwo grew on me as well. :D

kingsamurai, August 17th, 2008, 10:15 am

Chikorita shall do the glory.
Awesome.

Vye Brante, August 17th, 2008, 8:23 pm

Phoenix of Chaos: Heh, yeah, it's hard to choose between them. Vapeoreon and Espeon are probably my favorite out of the Eon's, if that helps. Heh.

This is a test: More great Pokemon there!

Rebirth: Welcome back! I hope you join us again soon. Hope you like what you see.

SaitouRyu: Good, Mewtwo should grow on everyone. Ha ha! And yeah, don't forget about Absol.

I think I have too many Pokemon cards too. I should go back to only collecting Mewtwo cards.

kingsamurai: Indeed!

spudwalt (Guest), December 17th, 2008, 2:41 pm

I don't really have obvious favorites among Pokemon; I generally like whatever I'm using at the moment.
Flygon is among my favorites, along with Aggron and Snorlax (probably what I'd be if I were a Pokemon).

kay osse, December 17th, 2008, 2:45 pm

Snorlax is amazing. yay tanks! but for a truely amazing tank, try vaporeon. most of my buddies werent prepared for the amount of HP my baby had :)

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