Your typical story about a girl from our world pulled into the Pokémon world . . . or is it?

Hillaree, known by her friends as the "Mewtwo Queen," is suddenly taken to a world where Pokémon are real. She is told she will be returned home when she is ready. What could that mean? Well, since she's going to be there a while, she might as well catch some Pokémon!

A Pokémon Fan Comic written and drawn by Vye Brante. Rated Teen for some violence/fighting, blood, and death.

Currently updates on Wednesday and Saturday. Please note: This comic does not follow any established canon, but does use characters from the games, anime, and mangas. Histories and personalities may be changed.

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Discussion 05

19 Sep 2007 01:30 pm

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Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, 18 Sep 2007 03:12 pm

Mwahahaha! Yeah, even compared to previous chapters, nothing happened really in this chapter. I was pretty sick of it for a while. Glad it's over now.

Next chapter will be better. Battles and plot-like stuff. Promise.

Speaking of which, if you haven't visited the forums then you may not have noticed a thread there with a preview thingy for Chapter 6. Take a look if you like!

http://justgotta.myfastforum.org/about89.html

User's Comments:

Sol, 19 Sep 2007 02:24 pm

Just a suggestion. Have you thought about re-naming the archive pages so that it includes the chapter number, to make it easier to navigate?

Just a thought. I do that with my comic, and it makes it easier to keep track of things.

Vye Brante, 19 Sep 2007 02:41 pm

Hm . . . No, I haven't. I named the Chapters themselves and all the inclusive pages would be below, or above if you use that box below the pages, so I thought it was pretty straight forward.

I might be wrong though. I'll put some thought into it.

amjam, 19 Sep 2007 03:51 pm

I saw the thread, but haven't commented yet.

Technically, if ya wrote it, it's not a filler; it's if they add even more useless junk in the anime. XD But it is filler-full. hint: more evur filling, less Mewtwo-poster filling. ^D^

Vye Brante, 19 Sep 2007 04:00 pm

If you say so. (Your post went up twice so I deleted the extra, if that's okay.)

Well, if that's your definition of filler, okay then. I just felt like it was stuff that kinda needed to be done but not really. It could have been cut but I didn't.

Heh, more Evur filler huh? Maybe . . .

Sol, 19 Sep 2007 04:01 pm

It's up to you Vye, but I feel it gives readers a better understanding of how long a chapter is, and such.

Vye Brante, 19 Sep 2007 04:41 pm

I'll ask around. And see if it's something I should do.

kirbyboy102, 19 Sep 2007 05:30 pm

Vye, your filler is so high quality, it doesn't qualify~

I love this chapter, though. It adds suspense, and the chapter is light & fluffy. Sorta like blueberry pancakes.

oh, and as for chapter-pages, I would do that. It would be easier for the readers.

Vye Brante, 19 Sep 2007 07:49 pm

Heh. So you're on Amjam's side, huh? Well . . . all right.

Light and fluffy chapters, (and pancakes,) are good once and a while. I just wish there could have been more plot. Overall, the chapter wasn't bad. Just kinda . . . empty, I guess.

You're for the chapter titles, huh? I'm still thinking about it, so thanks for your input.