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Ch. 17 Page 565

December 14th, 2011, 11:10 am

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Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, December 12th, 2011, 7:51 pm

End of Chapter 17 Been over a year in the making, but Chapter 17 is finally done! Let's move on! Geez!

Simple page, but I think it is getting the idea across. Not really much to say about it. Recorded it again but still haven't decided what to do with all the video. Should probably decide.

Like I mentioned, there will be a break before Chapter 18 starts. I want to get KoD going and the Nuzlocke. I'll be doing special updates on this site though. They will be fillers, but educational. You'll see what I mean. I don't know how often I'll get them up, but I'm hoping at least once a week.

Well, hope you enjoyed this chapter. I'll let you know about the other updates. Visit the forums!

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User's Comments:

Hero of Comedy, December 14th, 2011, 4:27 pm

Her friends just proved that great minds think alike.

spudwalt (Guest), December 14th, 2011, 7:35 pm

Hillaree might not like it, but it'll be for her own good.

nerfblade, December 14th, 2011, 9:13 pm

Friends who wilin to put themselves against some numans if it means you're alright.

Friendship is turly magical. (THERE, MY LITTLE PONY FANS, I SAID IT!)

Lady Darkrina, December 15th, 2011, 8:44 am

Heh, well I can't wait until I see what happens next^^

crapcarp, December 15th, 2011, 4:12 pm

*whistles* Looks like someone's been busy! Too bad I've been lazy. Well, time to rectify that!*cracks knuckles*

Panel 1: Oh dear. It looks like you're still doin' them side mouths. Draw the side of the face properly. And no, there is no excuse for such, I'm afraid. You might chalk it up to style but I'm not gonna let that slide. There are plenty of anime where they draw the face at a side angle properly. I know it's difficult to get right, to say the least, but trying and failing is better than not trying at all and using "it's the anime style" as an excuse. And since we're going on the side mouth, let's take a gander at the eye. It looks quite awkward how it's the same shape when looking at it from both the side and front. I suggest when drawing the eye at the side, draw a triangle as a base for it. Although, given how you draw eyes that might be a little hard to do, but nothing worth doing in life is easy. Now for the gasmas-opps, I mean nose and jawline. The nose there is EXTREMELY pointy, and long. That and the lips are done WAY too high. Okay, it's damn well obvious you need to study the basics of face anatomy. A little study of the fundamentals goes a VERY long way.

Panel 2: Not much to say about this that hasn't already been said, except that you shouldn't make the face so angular. The human figure is curvy, curvy, curvy, and that goes double for females.

Panel 3: See Panel 1

Panel 4: Have you ever considered using an officail drawing of a charmander as a reference for drawing it?

Panel 5: Wait a second, did you just copy and paste, Vye!? For shame, Vye, for shame.

Panel 6: See Panel 5.

Panel 7: Something about Hilireee's expression here seems hilirious to me. Anyways, to business: Background looks okay, though it could use some more love. What is up with that wacky face anatomy you got goin' there? I mean, seriously, she looks like a frickin' horse. The nose is WAY too long(probably because of how you draw the eyes, though it's no excuse). The face it angular, resulting in the awkward look with the mouth relative to the chin(although it's a lot worse in Panel 2) and the bandage. Also, why are her ears different sizes?

Okay, so in short, study some face anatomy and practice it. I won't bother you(as much) about it if you actually start practicing it('cause then I'll simply give you suggestions of where to improve). I hope you'l take these on board so we can see some good stuff coming from ya!

nerfblade, December 28th, 2011, 2:41 pm

i think 5 & 6 was... Called for in my eyes. Its also like it chould been done at dif. angles; but, it mealt more work aand longer update time... not only that. It seem bettter with copy & paste. End of Questline.

Rocket0634, April 17th, 2012, 1:16 pm

Ah, there's a new banner!
Too bad there aren't any more rotating characters. I thought that was kinda neat. Well, it at least shows you're going to be active again!

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