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Ch. 17 Page 546

July 16th, 2011, 11:35 am

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Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, July 16th, 2011, 1:58 am

BACKGROUNDS! So many of them! Ugh! Okay, sure, three, but that's most of the page! Look at what I had to draw in comparison to the backgrounds I added later! Took a long time!

Came out better than I thought. I don't know how clear it all is, but I'm confident at least the idea is coming across. Just more than I'm used to doing and a lot more detail than I normally have to add. Curse you quality!

Well, it's over now. Next page will have some more though. Darn it. Not as much though, I don't think. So there's that.

Tried to show some of the Aerodactyl damage. So now it looks like a city that had actually been attacked. Go figure. Other than that, just a bit of Lance thinking about Team Rocket and such. Seems he's noticed a trend with the news reports. Wonder what that could mean. Like you though, Lance is out of the loop with this Team Rocket stuff. Maybe that will be fixed later.

Not much else to say about this. So visit the forums! Contest is still going on of course, so feel free to enter. Just Mewtwo also updated yesterday, so check that out if you haven't.

Now to go reply to comments on the last couple pages.

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User's Comments:

Hero of Comedy, July 16th, 2011, 12:35 pm

Never made sense?
Can't be the Team Rocket from the Robot world then.

Djoing, July 16th, 2011, 1:06 pm

NOt homeless.


Dalek555, July 16th, 2011, 4:23 pm

I always wondered what kind of government the Pokemon world has.

The anti-rocket propaganda makes it sound communist or something.

spudwalt (Guest), July 16th, 2011, 6:18 pm

@ Dalek555: Well, the media has always kinda overreacted to stuff. Maybe it just goes a bit farther with a criminal organization like Team Rocket?

Yo mama! (Guest), July 17th, 2011, 1:39 am

This webcomic sucks. It sucks hard. It sucks balls. It is a complete waste of space.

It's "art" is just a bunch of fucking shit smears. What's worse is that it never improves. Seriously, look at the first and latest pages and honestly tell me that there is a notable difference. And I mean NOTABLE, not NOTCIABLE 'cause I know you fanboys and fangirls with their heads up their asses will just try to argue with me by saying "There IS a noticable difference OMG TROLL11!!1!1".
Just stop that right now, take your fingers off of the goddamn keyboard RIGHT FUCKING NOW 'cause you need to read this and understand it if you wanna defend this piece of worthless shit and not look like a shit-eating retard.

Oh wait, YOU GUYS ARE SHIT-EATING RETARDS! You somehow tolerate eating this stupid dogshit, whereas people like me, people who have taste, have to search harder and harder to find good stuff.

The story is a complete shit-storm too, it's based on Pokemon for fuck's sake.


Good God, dude. Grow the fuck up! Not to mention the fact that the main character is obviously a Mary-Sue. Oh what's that? I'm wrong? I'm WROOOOOOOONG!!111!!!

Well, if I'm so wrong then go ahead and prove it. Come on, I dare you. I'd like to see some of the bullshit you guys are gonna come up with. Go ahead, fanboys and fangirls, make my fucking day! Perverse the artform of webcomics. Go ahead, make a bunch of shit. I mean, all I want to see is some EFFORT! Is that too much to ask? Is it? Or would you rather just rage reply to this comment and make yourself look like an idiot.

You decide.

Vye Brante, July 17th, 2011, 3:00 am

Ha ha, troll. I'll get to you my friend.

Hero of Comedy: Guess not.

Djoing: And jobless perhaps. Until repairs are done at least.

Along those lines, I had a dream once that my old work place burned down. It was quite odd.

Dalek555: Hm. You know, I never put a lot of thought into what kind of government they have. Doesn't matter a whole lot as far as this story is concerned though. Propaganda isn't exclusive to communist governments though. It can (and does) exist everywhere.

spudwalt: Yep, true. The media likes to blow anything out of proportion if they can.

Yo mama: Okay, let's discuss this like rational adults, shall we? If you are not yet an adult, let's then try to be mature.

First and foremost, you seem to be afraid of being called a troll. However, you act like one. At least own up to what you are. Why are you a troll? Well, your arguments seem to be, "This comic is bad because I say so and you are all stupid!"

There is such a thing as constructive criticism, you see. You are just being plain negative for no established reason. Okay, so you did not enjoy the comic. Do I blame you? Do I disregard your opinion simply because of that? No. It's because you do nothing but swear and insult without bring up specific complaints.

Let's give a couple of examples. They have been edited because I do not swear.

"The story is a complete <swear>-storm too, it's based on Pokemon for <swear> sake."

Okay, so there is a problem with that? Do you not like Pokemon based fiction? If this is the case, why read a Pokemon based comic? If that is not your problem, then what is? Why is the story such a <swear>-storm? Can you tell me what it is you don't like about it?

"Not to mention the fact that the main character is obviously a Mary-Sue. Oh what's that? I'm wrong? I'm WROOOOOOOONG!!111!!!"

First off, I would like to say that no, you are not wrong. I realize that Hillaree is quite Mary-Sueish and I have been working on correcting that. That takes time however. Agreeing with you aside, you can't just say, "This character is horrible, they are a Mary Sue!" You need to address WHY they are horrible or WHY they are a Mary Sue. If you don't lay it out, how is the author supposed to know so they can work on getting better?

You keep telling people to prove your wrong. How can we when you make no points to refute? We can't address your complaints if you don't actually make them. What exactly do you find wrong?

I would also like to say that if you are going to complain about my comic, can you please find something ORIGINAL to complain about? I have NEVER claimed to be an artist. If you read my comments, I am constantly pointing out flaws and complaining how I can't draw. I just am too stubborn to do anything about that. Unfortunately it means my readers have to put up with my crappy art. Yet, they still enjoy it regardless. If you can't get past it, then don't read it. I don't want anyone reading my work if they don't find it entertaining. If you can't even find the entertainment in it being so bad, then you're just wasting your time and you shouldn't do that.

All you want to see is some effort, huh? Are you a comic artist? Do you have a comic with 500+ pages? If that doesn't show I'm trying and that I'm dedicated to the project, then tell me what else I need to do. I am trying. Just at my own pace and my own way.

So I'm afraid until you give me some pointers I can work on, and give me something specific to figure out why you seem to hate this comic so badly, I'm afraid I have to disregard you as a simple troll and nothing more. If you can be more civilized, please do comment again with something useful to me. I welcome all criticism if I can actually find it helpful. You're just trying to be hurtful.

Also, don't pick on my fans. You can insult me all you want, but they have done nothing to you.

Thank you for taking time to read and commenting!

Jelly Bear, July 17th, 2011, 1:30 pm

I smell trolls.... >3>; I'd just like to say...

.....that there's little hope for the world if this is what people do for kicks these days...

Who put the gun to your head and forced you to come here and read this comic? Constructive criticism is something every artist needs, but there's nothing constructive you're doing here. You're just.... bashing for the sake of bashing.

If there's room in the vast Internet for shit-talking scum like yourself, then there's plenty more for artists; beginners AND experts, to partake in their hobbies.... And I find it to be very sad that you're judging as you are.

I'm not telling you to like the comic, but it'd be nice if you could just voice your opinion in a more respectful way. There's no need for a vicious rant.

Would you talk like that to a person in real life? If you do, then you've probably suffered from many broken noses.

Don't you have anything better to do? Where does all this hate come from? You must be either extremely bored and pathetic, or you are one fucked up kid.

Dalek555, July 17th, 2011, 5:59 pm

Why read it if you hate it? That's like an anti-sports person watching ESPN all day.

Joanne Kaye (Guest), July 18th, 2011, 1:01 am

I can't help but think of my autistic brother watching AFL. He whines, he yells, he gets grumpy at everyone in the house, and complains when he's tired in the morning from staying up so late. But he still watches it, every Friday. Let's just marinate on that implied metaphor. ;)

Crapcarp (Guest), July 18th, 2011, 3:59 am

GODDAMN IT!! I can't log in. So, I'll just improvise.

Vye, please improve your perspective. It's really frustrating to read walls of text when the perspective of the backgrounds and the characters don't match(mind you, I don't mind the walls of text, you've earned my respect to read them). I'm guessing that you drew the characters first and then drew the backgrounds. If you did, just keep the perspective in mind while you draw the characters and backgrounds.

Keep improving and never be satisfied.

As for the troll: Just because the story is based off of Pokemon doesn't mean it's bad. Honestly, you're telling me to grow up? Epic LULZ!! There's nothing wrong with getting in touch with your inner child and being creative. In fact, I believe that it makes you more of an adult. And swearing is SOOO mature isn't it? You like swear words? Here:

Shut. The. FAAUAUAUAUCK. up.

Pathetic pissant.

blizzard (Guest), July 18th, 2011, 5:00 pm

ohai 12 year old CoD addict

qwerty (Guest), August 9th, 2011, 3:07 pm


mika (Guest), August 12th, 2011, 7:53 pm

That hat... It can only be one of the two pokemon boys that i fangirl at (one of them stands on top of a freaking mountain)

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