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Vye Brante, 26 Feb 2007 05:26 pm

It might not fit . . . Hillaree and the Charmander's theme tone here may not seem to fit with the conversation, but this is a bonding moment for the two of them so I decided to use it anyway.

I don't like to brag about my work . . . but I think this page is really cute. It's actually the only one I've drawn more than once. Back before starting the comic, I drew a page like this, just slightly different. I was going to use the first picture, but there were some things that I wanted to change, so I just redrew it. I like how it came out. Still not perfect by any means, but I still like it.

I wasn't sure how to draw a Charmander sitting down, so that's what I came up with. Kinda can't tell . . .

I didn't use tails on the word bubbles. I thought since Charmander's words were being translated and in parentheses, you could tell who was talking. Hope it didn't confuse anyone.

I forgot to say on the last page, but this is hours after Hillaree first fell asleep. Pr. Evur and his Pokémon went to sleep as well. I didn't forget about them. Just didn't have a good place to have them leave. Just so you know!

Neogeorgia155, 27 Feb 2007 01:17 pm

Hm..Cool.

EDIT:It is cute.

Vye Brante, 27 Feb 2007 01:56 pm

Thanks! Great! I'm glad you like it too! Good to know that someone out there agrees that it's cute. Didn't want to be the only one . . .

amjam, 27 Feb 2007 02:13 pm

I think so too! It is very cute. :3 They look very sweet, sitting and having their conversation.
Waah! I don't want Charmander to have bad dreams! -cry- I'll comfort you, little fella!

Also, about the DS thing... Maybe I can make a person on her file. ^^; Then, just use her DS when I want to go on Wild World. Eh, whatever. I'm saving up for Pearl and a DS Lite, though, so I can't go buying another Wild World. >>;

Vye Brante, 27 Feb 2007 02:55 pm

Another person agrees. Great! Whew. I really was worried I'd be the only one who liked this page. I really need to stop worrying so much!

As for the Wild World idea, if your sister doesn't mind, that would probably be best. But it's not really my decision to make. I just didn't want your file to prevent her from using the Wi-Fi because of me . . . I don't wanna cause trouble.

Falco Vespertinus, 27 Feb 2007 03:05 pm

Yay for Pokemon goodness! I'm glad to see more Pokemon comics on Smack Jeeves =3 Great so far~

Vye Brante, 27 Feb 2007 03:10 pm

Thank you! Glad you like it! I've seen your comic too and I think it's cute! Thanks for taking time to read mine!

WhizzKidd, 27 Feb 2007 05:29 pm

Hilaree looks really good sitting down, but like you said, Charmander barely looks like he's sitting. It's still not a terrible comic though. This one is not that bad.

To continue with the whole starting team in D/P, I'll probably have Piplup, Budew, Glameow, Misdreavus, Zubat, and Ponyta on my Pearl. Obviously, I like having familiar faces on my team. I'd have a Gengar or an Alakazam on my team but I already have one of each on Level 100 from my LeafGreen. Oh well! ^_^ Although I really like Piplup and Yukikaburi, my favorite D/P Pokémon so far is definitely Budew. I find it really cute.

Vye Brante, 27 Feb 2007 05:45 pm

Cool Well, "not that bad" is better than "bad," so thank you!

Heh, I notice so far that no one has said that they're going to have a Turtwig . . . Anyway, sounds like another great team! I really wanted a Zubat on mine, (I love Zubat and evolutions!) but I decided to train all new Pokémon this time. I haven't done that before, so thought I'd try it this time. Don't worry, Zubat! I haven't forgotten you!

iWish, 27 Feb 2007 09:52 pm

once more, you have made a great comic! though it doesn't seem like a comic due to little amount of panels but it's still great!

Vye Brante, 28 Feb 2007 02:15 am

Um . . . Your comment was on there twice, so I deleted the extra. Is that okay, iWish?

Anyways, thanks! Yeah, this page was just one big panel, (actually something I liked about it 'cause that means I only had one thing to draw,) so it may seem out of place what with my usual crazy, random panel placement. But, the whole pages will become common as we go along so get used to them! (Well, not too common, but not like . . . uncommon.) Thanks again!

Sorry it took a while to reply. My brother had to use the computer. But I got it back!

Shiroku, 30 Apr 2007 08:51 pm

Loving this. How cute. ^__^ I remember when I was younger I tried to make my own Pokemon comics.. Hehehe. I remember how some of them went. Wish I could find them. They're probably somewhere stashed away with various other papers. If I ever do find them, I should post them up. Even though they're as horrible as one could immagine, it's just the memory that counts to me.

Vye Brante, 01 May 2007 12:04 pm

Great! Glad you like it! I have a few pages of a Pokémon comic I drew in High School. As bad as it is now, my art was a WHOLE lot worse back then. I should burn those . . . but like you said, they're memories.

Still need to be burned.

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