Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, 21 Feb 2007 03:45 am

Lazy . . . I got this page done on schedule, (my schedule anyway,) but I was sorta lazy with it. I'm actually surprised it came out as well as it did. I hope it's okay . . .

It's becoming apparent that I have no idea how to draw fire. Hope that looks okay too.

The picture of Charmander in the last panel didn't come out exactly as planned. I really hope I can do better in the future. That background tone is the same one I used on the title page. It's not that I couldn't find another one to use, it's just that I kinda decided that it should be more or less Hillaree and Charmander's official background tone. I don't know if it's normal to have a tone going along with a set of characters when they interact, but I guess these two do. And for all I know, I'll change my mind about what their official tone should be.

If you're wondering why Charmander is so happy about what she said, and seemed so sad about what Pr. Evur said . . . well, be patient. We're going to get to that soon.

I'm going to try harder on future pages. Wasn't particularly pleased with this one. Thanks for bearing with me.

User's Comments:

Vye Brante, 21 Feb 2007 12:10 pm

Thank you! Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment! I'm glad you gave it a chance, especially since you haven't done much with Pokémon lately.

I feel the same way; it would be so cool if I could actually go to a world with real Pokémon. I would want a Charizard and a Pikachu too! Ho-Oh isn't one of my favorites, but given the chance, I'd catch it too.

XxHaNlxX, 21 Feb 2007 02:11 pm

I want a mewtwo! -joins the conversation- lol he my favorite =3

Anyway. HOORAY FOR UPDATES! -wiggle- and now I can't wait for the next page xDD

jesseo382, 21 Feb 2007 08:44 pm

I would want corphish my favorite!

Vye Brante, 21 Feb 2007 09:53 pm

XxHaNIxX: I would want a Mewtwo too. He is also my favorite! (I think that's pretty obvious with all this Mewtwo stuff I keep doing with the comic . . .)

I'm actually kind of surprised that you liked the page. (I wasn't too happy with how it came out, like I said.) But it's a happy surprised. It's always great when readers are excited for more.

Jesseo382: Corphish is your favorite huh? Cool!

There are a lot of Pokémon I would like to captuer if they were real. If I could only choose one, I'd go for a Charizard. Not sure why when Mewtwo's my favorite . . .

iWish, 21 Feb 2007 10:58 pm

I would want a squirtle because when pokemon first started, that's what my big bro called me. and because he's a turtle.(turtle's rock!)

Vye Brante, 21 Feb 2007 11:16 pm

Another Good One Squirtle's another good one. (Man, why are there so many cool Pokémon?!) Turtles rock out loud!

WhizzKidd, 22 Feb 2007 10:09 am

My personal favorite is Ludicolo. Call me weird or whatever, but I do. And Metagross is pretty cool too. ^_^ Anyway, I think that Charmander didn't like what Prof. Evur said because Prof. Evur probably doesn't think it's a good thing... anyway this comic is pretty good! Keep it up!

Vye Brante, 22 Feb 2007 12:33 pm

Dang, another good one! Ludicolo, huh? I didn't care much for Ludicolo but then I decided to train one. I had one on my team and now I think they're cool! So no, I don't think you're weird. Metagross is cool too.

Well, your theory on Pr. Evur's thoughts is somewhat close . . . I guess if you were to sum it up and simplify it, that'd be pretty much what you'd come out with. But if we wanna know the details, we'll have to wait a bit.

And thanks for your encouragement! Next page soon! Hopefully another good one!

gabser221167, 17 Apr 2009 04:14 pm

You can draw fire better than anyone i know that has drawn fire for me, and thats saying a lot!

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