Your typical story about a girl from our world pulled into the Pokémon world . . . or is it?

Hillaree, known by her friends as the "Mewtwo Queen," is suddenly taken to a world where Pokémon are real. She is told she will be returned home when she is ready. What could that mean? Well, since she's going to be there a while, she might as well catch some Pokémon!

A Pokémon Fan Comic written and drawn by Vye Brante. Coloring jobs beginning with Chapter 5 done by xxHANIxx. The art gets better as you go, trust me.

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Abandoned Concept 01

12 Feb 2007 04:05 pm

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Vye Brante, 07 Feb 2007 02:50 pm

Another Explanation I actually started writing these Pokémon Stories in the 7th Grade. I left them alone for a while to work on original stories, but decided to come back to them after Pokémon Mystery Dungeon came out. A lot of things were changed and some ideas were abandoned.

For the heck of it, I decided to let you know what ideas where abandoned. This is the first one . . . er, two. Well, I stuck them together.

Originally, Giovanni of Team Rocket was going to be the one who brought Hillaree to the Pokémon world. He noticed the younger generation of Pokémon trainers were having great success. He thought if he could get a child like that work for him, he'd get what he wanted. But he couldn't trust they'd obey him, so he came up with the idea to kidnap one from another world. That way they wouldn't have a choice.

He picked Hillaree, mostly because of her love for Mewtwo. He figured she'd do her best to capture him. But during her passage to the Pokémon world, their machine that made the portal malfunctioned and for a little while, Hillaree was trapped in the "Dimension Between Dimensions." While there, Hillaree was transformed from her fourteen-year-old self into her ten-year-old self.

Sheesh, long explanation. Sorry, I can be longwinded. These concepts were abandoned because I decided to cut the whole thing with Hillaree turning ten out. It didn't seem relevent. That left also to the whole Dimension Between Dimension thing being cut out simply because it wasn't necessary. (And it shortened the story a bit, fortunately.) The Giovanni idea was scratched because I came up with something better for Giovanni to do. (You'll see later . . .)

The picture of Hillaree there is a recreation of her old design. The actual design and picture that I have of it are scary beyond words . . . so it was tweaked a bit. I actually put more work into making Giovanni look good than the old Hillaree . . .

So yeah. There's the first Abandoned Concept. More to come later.

User's Comments:

jesseo382, 07 Feb 2007 06:33 pm

yay can't wait!

Vye Brante, 07 Feb 2007 06:42 pm

Awesome! Nice to see you're excited!

Hanzinator, 28 Dec 2007 03:00 pm

BRING THE FREAKIN MORE!!! IWANNASEEIWANNASEEIWANNASEE... well, depends.

Vye Brante, 28 Dec 2007 03:29 pm

Heh, okay. If you mean more Abandoned Concepts, then stay tuned.

Hikari-chan (Guest), 27 Feb 2008 01:46 pm

Pokémon manga? Pokémon Special manga... You've been reading the Pokémon Special manga! The one with Cart and Shum and Will and Karen and the Mask of Ice!