Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, 16 Oct 2010 03:38 am

End of Chapter 16 We have finally made it to the end of this chapter! Been a while. Sorry about that. But we're here so Chapter 17 will start soon. I have a gag. Not planning anything else at the moment. If you guys want to do one, better get it in! I probably won't be starting Chapter 17 right away either way because I desperately need buffer.

I tried some different effects in the last panel for those energy ball things. I like it but it's a bit of a pain to do so I may not do it all the time. We'll see I guess. But yeah, Chapter 17 will have Hillaree and Ven facing each other while Pr. Evur and Kuri continue their fight. Should be good. Wonder what Hazel and those guys are up to.

I'm still considering the contest and prizes. Don't forget about the poll!

Not much else to mention about the page or anything, but there was something else I wanted to talk about. So I apologize if the comment is long.

I wanted to give a quick shout out to HeartfeltSins, author of a comic called Pokemon Reality. You see, HeartfeltSins requested to be an affiliate. Normally, I wouldn't have had a problem, however, Pokemon Reality is a GL comic.

Okay, now DO NOT TURN THIS PAGE INTO A DEBATE, okay? I myself do not agree with homosexuality. Typically, I stay completely away from BL or GL comics. Do I think anyone who is gay will burn in heck or whatever? Not necessarily. I believe that it's wrong, but that everyone else can make their own decisions. What they do is not my business. I have no right to tell them what to do, just as I believe I have the right to my own opinions and decisions. Please respect that.

So anyway, I could not in good conscience affiliate with the comic. I was afraid that this would offend HeartfeltSins. It was nothing against her or her comic but I just couldn't do it and be comfortable with myself. But, HeartfeltSins was really nice about it and seemed to understand. That's what the Internet needs more of, people like her. Can't we all just respect other people's feelings? (Pah, yeah, like that would ever happen.)

So yeah, I wanted to thank her for being cool with it. She also took some critism/pointers I came of the comic quite well. I hope it'll be some use to her. If you want a new Pokemon comic to read, and don't mind GL, go check it out. If nothing else, maybe you'll have more advice for her to use to help make the comic better. Always a good thing.

Maybe she'll actually pay attention to the advice people give her . . . unlike me . . .

Oh, and if anyone tries to start a debate or a fight or attack my beliefs, I will delete your comments. I don't care to fight with you about what you believe or what I believe. Even if you agree with me but start attacking homosexuality, I'll delete the comment. It's only fair and it's still rude. And this is a dang Pokemon fan comic. Let's all be friends or somethin' and be geeks about Pokemon.

Just covering my bases. I do that.

Anyway, I think that's all I got to say, so visit the forums!

User's Comments:

Djoing, 16 Oct 2010 11:54 am

You wouldn't like Hillaree when she's ticked off.

Someone was going to say it!

Paylos, 16 Oct 2010 12:31 pm

Congats Zen... you will not see the light of day again.... just stars

Akulshae (Guest), 16 Oct 2010 12:49 pm

I actually find your position that it's none of your business what other people do respectable. None of my business either. I didn't know that people could be affiliates though. What does that mean exactly in this context? Cause maybe if it involved pointers on plot holes, I could reread your stuff and try to help you out. Admittedly you seem very hesitant to reveal things in the story until it is dramatically awesome (that's me not having a good vocabulary). I don't have the patience to be dramatic and want to reveal everything ALL AT ONCE. It's a flaw I have in writing stories. I'm jealous of you for that attribute. I like the last panel. Your art has really improved over the years. I actually only started reading a short while ago and noticed the art evolving quickly since I was reading it all at once instead of one page at a time. It's kind of annoying now that I have to wait though.

Maybe I'll make a gag. Not sure though.

Lady Darkrina, 16 Oct 2010 01:17 pm

Lol, hurray for Hillarie!^_^

Silverlilly, 16 Oct 2010 02:24 pm

*shudders* Hillaree in anger mode.........RUN!

riolu413, 16 Oct 2010 03:45 pm

Sparkly.... O.O

spudwalt (Guest), 16 Oct 2010 05:57 pm

I sense impending pwnage.

crapcarp, 16 Oct 2010 10:01 pm

HEL YEAH!! Ven is goin' down!! And it's about time we got some action.

ANYways, is the gag you mentioned my gag? Y'know, the one with Giovanni and all(I don't like to reveal TOO much here)? If not well I simply want to remind you considering it's been awhile, that's all.

Vye Brante, 17 Oct 2010 01:38 am

Djoing: Ha ha, yeah, it should have been said. I hadn't thought of it actually, but it fit.

Paylos: Well, I think you mean Ven, but yep, it's true.

Akulshae: Thank you for saying so. I was worrying I'd not explain myself right and just end up upsetting someone.

As for what an affiliate is, do you see the little button banners that appear above each page? Like by the link to the forum and stuff? My affiliate comics are comics that I like to and they link back to me, in essence. They are comics that I like and support as well. So when someone requests to be an affiliate of mine, they are asking me to link to their comic and they will link back to mine in exchange.

The giving the tips and pointers were just so I could give her something, even if it wasn't much. You are welcome to try and clear up plot holes if you want. Although yeah, it may just mostly be because of stuff that isn't revealed yet. Still, if you feel like pointing out things you see that I might miss, that's always good.

I am glad you have liked reading and can see I'm getting better. (Even if it is VERY slowly.) If you do happen to get a gag done, go ahead and send it over!

Lady Darkrina: Hurray indeed!

Silverlilly: Yeah, that'd be wise.

riolu413: Yeah, I guess it is a bit.

spudwalt: Yes, that is quite possible. Heh heh.

crapcarp: Hm? The gag I meant is the one I drew. (It actually is Giovanni related too, oddly enough.) I don't remember you sending me a gag. I remember your test pages and then a page with doodles of characters that didn't seem to connect to each other. Was that the gag? If so . . . I unfortunately missed the joke . . . Seemed more like fan art to me.

So if I forgot something else, let me know.

And yeah, it's been a while since we've had some action. We're overdo I think!

StarMario777 & ChaosSonic777, 17 Oct 2010 07:19 pm

I see Hilaree underestimating this guy...

and I have a question: where IS Mewtwo. If you are following the game's storyline, then the hero caught it (or is still wandering around). And speaking of which, will we meet Red/Leaf anytime in this story?

greed145 (Guest), 18 Oct 2010 07:08 am

Oh.... Well fu- *BOOM*

SilverLion (Guest), 19 Oct 2010 12:54 am

Hilaree, THUNDER ATTACK!

Hero of Comedy, 19 Oct 2010 04:31 pm

The Incredible Hilaree.

Chelleromo, 21 Oct 2010 08:43 am

RUN ZEN RUN. >:0

I really like the layout of this page. It's got just the right amount of panels and the dialogue is quick and simple. Great page!

grr8008, 23 Oct 2010 04:03 pm

o_0 Oh my....I'm officially scared now....AWESOMENESSCOMICOFAWESOMENESSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Falls over*

Sorry, had to get that out of my system. Thanks Vye! :)

Vye Brante, 10 Nov 2010 02:11 am

Geez! I'm even more behind on comments than I thought!

StarMario777 & ChaosSonic777: The Mewtwo of the Just Gotta universe is having his origins played out in Just Mewtwo. As to where he is currently in this timeline, I cannot say. As for Red, I do love his character, and I have used Silver and Sird so I'm open to using Manga characters. But I have no definite plans for Red as of yet as I have no real purpose for him. If I find one, I'll use him.

greed145: Ha ha, exactly.

SilverLion: I wondered why it was a thunder attack and then I remembered the background. Go me.

Hero of Comedy: Indeed. And she didn't even need to be exposed to radiation to do it.

Chelleromo: Running would probably be a good idea for Ven, huh?

It always seems the pages with the fewest panels and dialogue seem to go over the smoothest. I try not to do it too often though as then Just Gotta will then take even longer to go through. But oh well.

grr8008: Heh, you're scared but you think it's awesome? Okay. Heh. And you're welcome.

Foxblaze, 06 Dec 2010 02:10 pm

Congratulations! You've ticked me off! You're prize.... DEATH!

Russell, 10 Feb 2011 07:33 pm

you forgot one important thing. Do not piss off Hilary. There is no escape if you do, bye bye character~

grr8008, 06 Mar 2012 06:13 pm

I'm rereading from a bit in the past...and that comment, "Congratulations, you've ticked me off" is just so cool.

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