Author's Comments:

Vye Brante, 01 Jul 2009 06:36 pm

Meh, I don't like this page. I was trying to cram too much into it, I think. The flow is a bit weird, and there was little room for all of the word bubbles. And I was lazy artwise so there's very little to make up for the rest of the page. If I was a less lazy person, I'd redo this page and make it two instead of one. But . . . yeah. We need to get back on track anyway.

So now Spyro can see Mewthree too. That's pretty nifty. Mewthree introduces the link for you, although a lot of you figured that out anyway. I threw in the flashback in the second to last panel to remind you of when Hillaree got hit on Page 294, but it's hard to tell that's what it is . . . And the Abra is back too! I like his teleport effects at least. I'll experiment more with it, but I like it.

The next page is the last of this chapter! Finally! Sheesh, I started this chapter in March! Remember that after the chapter is over, Just Gotta will be on hold until I get the chapter in Gotta Past finished. This also works out as I can't decide for sure how I want Chapter 14 to go. I keep changing my mind. More time to think it over will be nice. Just remember to get gags and stuff in to me so I can put them up in the meantime! I'll still be doing a discussion and whatnot, so I'll provide a bit of filler. Just would like some help.

How about you visit the forums now? Huh? Huh? Huh? Huh?!!

User's Comments:

the being, 01 Jul 2009 06:46 pm

the last two panels moved a tiny bit too fast, but it's alright! ^^
Edit: sorry bout that! the internet is crashing on me here, (which means i am not at home) And i had to go, so i just kept clicking it and exited out of internet. heh.
And by the way, HAPPY 25TH PAGE ANIVERSERY! heh. that's right. I have been with this comic for 25 pages! yay me!

DragonhandX, 01 Jul 2009 07:01 pm

@comic:teleporting is awesome.

@comments:hhhmmmmmmmmm, i might make a gag.

you posted twice being.

spudwalt (Guest), 01 Jul 2009 07:08 pm

The page was a little crowded, but it works out. I guess it also reflects the fast pace of the story at this point.

Heh, now Spyro can see Mewthree. This should be interesting.

Vye Brante, 01 Jul 2009 07:30 pm

the being: The whole pacing and flow on this page was off. Thank you though!

You had a double post so I deleted the dupilicate. I am assuming that's okay.

DragonhandX: Thank you! And yay for gags!

spudwalt: Yeah, I should made the layout better. I don't know why I though I had to cram it all in. And yeah, this should be good!

VexxBlack, 01 Jul 2009 08:46 pm

Well that was random, "Who're you?!" "Hello there." XD;
Hmm...maybe not as random as the Abra o_o;

BlackCatz, 01 Jul 2009 11:16 pm

Abra seems to specialize in random, VexxBlack >.>

anyway, awesome to have Spyro see Mewthree now! XD Brill! And I really enjoyed the fast pace of this page.. it's apporiate for this page, as I'm sure a lot of stuff is happening all at once, as people get over the shock of Deoxys appearing and doing what he did..


I'm kinda tired right now.. spent a fun-filled day outside today with friends, seeing a parade, eating junk food and stuff.. all wearing red and white! It's July 1, so that means for us Canucks... it's Canada Day! XD So didn't check SJ until just now >.>

Djoing, 02 Jul 2009 01:33 am

'congratulations! Your Mewthree is now called "Hello there"'

PoC (Guest), 02 Jul 2009 05:23 am

She was stabbed in the back... why isn't she like "OW MY BACK SOMEONE GET THIS THING OUTTA ME ISUJOPASHJSIPDOFH!!!!!" already?

DragonhandX, 02 Jul 2009 07:06 am

@PoC:her shirt froze. the burn of the ice is making it hurt a lot.

Sammi_the_Echidna, 02 Jul 2009 10:34 am

I KNEW IT!! Haha...lol, Mewthree

Vye Brante, 02 Jul 2009 03:04 pm

VexxBlack: Yeah, the Abra was a bit more random than that . . . Just a bit.

BlackCatz: Happy Cananda Day then! Sounds like you had fun. Hope you got rested up!

The pacing kinda fits in that sense, I suppose. It just doesn't work as far as clarity goes, and clarity is very important!

Djoing: Ha ha, is he now?

PoC: She wasn't actually stabbed. Just hit with a chunk of ice real hard. It does look like she was stabbed though. I kinda drew it funny.

DragonhandX: Yep, exactly.

Sammi_the_Echinda: Yayz! And yay for Mewthree too!

DracheLehre, 02 Jul 2009 08:37 pm

Spyro's panic when he sees Mewthree is priceless

luvsmepokemon, 02 Jul 2009 09:44 pm

sorry vye 1. About freaking out like that...
2. Adressing you so formaly
3. joining in on youre fun...
i wont point stuff out on ppl you havent...
4. being lazy
5. freaking out
6. repeating myself but i just had too repeat that one

the being, 03 Jul 2009 07:56 am

Errr...
There is only one thing I want out of hilaree. XD
STOP PUSHING YOUR FRIENDS AWAY!
heh.
I know it will take time for that. :P
But when it does happen, I'll be very happy! XP

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